Hey there,
a few days ago, I had an idea for a new archetype: Psychic-Monsters who destroy themselves at the end of the turn they used their effects. However, before I start to make an archetype, I decided to create the fokus of it, and since I like the Shin Megami Tensei Series (especially the "Persona"-Spin-Off), I decided to make my personal favorite persona into the focus and, well, here is the result:

Izanagi no Magatsuhi
Rank/Negative Level/Level/Whatever 13 WIND
Psychic/Extra-Deck Monster
ATK 3500 DEF 4000
This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by it's own effect. This card's Special Summon cannot be negated. When this card was successfully summoned, other card's and effects cannot be activated, bansih every "Exodia the Forbidden One" on the field, in both players decks, hands and graveyards and the effects of all other face-up monster cards are negated until the end phase. You cannot conduct your battle phase the turn this card was summoned. If this card was summoned, except through it's own effect: Send it back to the Extra Deck, and if you do, banish 1 random card in your hand. You can Special Summon this card from the Extra Deck by discarding all cards in your hand and banishing every monster you currently control while you have at least four Psichic-Type monster cards with different names in your graveyard. This card is not threatened as WIND or Psychic-Type Monster. This card cannot be destroyed by it's own effect. You can only use this effect twice per turn: Select 1 of your banished monster cards; send it to the graveyard, ignoring other card effects, and gain 500 LP. As long as this card is on the field, Psychic-Type monsters in your gaveyard cannot be banished, cards whose effect text includes "you win the duel", except "Exodius the ultimate Forbidden Lord", and their effects cannot be used and banished "Exodia the Forbidden One"-cards cannot be sent to another location, ignoring other card effects. This card is not destroyed by battle with a DIVINE Monster. You can pay 2000 LP: Select 1 Psychic-Type Monster in your graveyard; this card gains the selected monsters effect, also send the selected card to the bottom of your deck.


So, I know this was quite much to read, sorry about that^^
What do you think of this card?
If OCG fixes are necessary (and I'm quite sure they are), please tell me how to fix it.

Greetings
VB99

Lv 13 necessary?

Why's he picking on poor Exodia like that? lol

"As long as this card is face-up on the field: Win conditions from card effects cannot be declared." *I think you have to actually declare the win condition, when you want. I've heard of people letting a couple of turns go by before showing Exodia in their hands.

You can have it be Special Summoned by banishing all Exodia Pieces in your Graveyard, face-down.

Nah Lv 13 isn't necessary, I just wanted to prevent people from accidently Special Summoning it via Metamorphosis or anything.

And about Exodia... Well, it's the only card that doesn't need to be on the field (or activated, being a permanent effect) and since I lost quite often because my opponent drew Exodia tanks to my Dark Bribe, I kinda came to dislike it... Btw, isn't it against the rules to hold all Exodia cards without using it?

If there is a way to script not being able to win from card effects, that would be great (and make the text way shorter lol)

The altered summoning condition is kinda odd... Not only is way harder (I think?) to fulfill, you also gain +1 card advantage...