nice but all the real el shadolls have effs that revolve around special summoned monster i think an eff like this would be better
1 "Shaddoll" monster + 1 WIND monster
Must first be Fusion Summoned. During either player's turn, when your opponent Special summons a monster, if you have a "Shaddoll" card in your hand: You can return that monster to the hand then send 1 "Shaddoll" card from your hand to the Graveyard. You can only use this effect of "El Shaddoll Serwind" once per turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 "Shaddoll" Spell/Trap Card in your Graveyard; add that target to your hand.

outlaw1994 wrote:

nice but all the real el shadolls have effs that revolve around special summoned monster i think an eff like this would be better
1 "Shaddoll" monster + 1 WIND monster
Must first be Fusion Summoned. During either player's turn, when your opponent Special summons a monster, if you have a "Shaddoll" card in your hand: You can return that monster to the hand then send 1 "Shaddoll" card from your hand to the Graveyard. You can only use this effect of "El Shaddoll Serwind" once per turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 "Shaddoll" Spell/Trap Card in your Graveyard; add that target to your hand.

Yeah, I know that all Shaddolls revolve about Special Summoning, I wanted to make something new because this kind of effect already have Egrystal. I don't have idea how can I change this effect to be better.

just have it send 1 shadoll from the deck to the grave. shi en can negate a spell or trap with no cost each turn, so having this sending a shadoll wouldn't be hurting the card at all.

cane_63106 wrote:

just have it send 1 shadoll from the deck to the grave. shi en can negate a spell or trap with no cost each turn, so having this sending a shadoll wouldn't be hurting the card at all.

So I should keep the Spell/Trap negation effect and give a cost to send 1 Shaddoll from your Deck?

"Once per turn, when your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card, you can send 1 'Shaddoll' monster from your deck to the Graveyard to negate its activation and destroy it."